Note: This is a Fibonacci (variation) found poem. I discovered the form via the Oulipost project. It's my new favorite thing. For a full description of the form, please read the post below. I kept all the punctuation accept one quotation mark and only added the ellipsis.
Source: Eric Goldscheider. "Fascinating mystery" Daily Hampshire Gazette [Northampton] April 4, 2014: A-1 and A-6. Print.
are…
are… are…
They
are…
rusty
blackbirds are…
and
bold eyebrows. Females are…
identify
“hot spots” were the rusty blackbirds are…
the resting places
these birds seek out have common have commoncharacteristics. Ultimately we are
Nice one Martina...especially like "and bold eyebrows/ Females are..." very clever...
ReplyDeleteThis is amazingly coherent for a Fibonacci poem! In these orts of poems, the choices the poet makes for line breaks and punctuation seems to be the key, and yours looks absolutely perfect "on the page."
ReplyDelete*sorts. Me can Spel.
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