Monday, April 7, 2014

N+7


This is what I would to do in traditional found poem with the segment of text I selected.  I chose to delete each an every article; replacing them in one case with a slash and the rest of the time with ellipsis.  Additionally, I removed a set of quotation mark that were, while of use in the article, detrimental to my poem.  Lastly,  I used different fonts in part of the poem and experimented with word placement.   Following the poem is today’s Oulipost assignment  is N+7. Poets are to select a passage from one of your newspaper articles. Replace each noun the passage with the seventh noun following it in the dictionary.  I decided to keep all the formatting changes I made to original found poem in this new poem.

Source: Urban, Cori. “Book a Trip Around the World” Springfield Republican  [Springfield] April  7, 2014: C-1 and C-2.  E-edition.

“They are
our future.

If they are not able to
 read,
                                    write…
 speak

in a proper manner,
where are we for our future?”

Reading, she said,
can give children …

E
      N
                                                                        E
                 R
                           G
                               Y
                                  /
                               Z
                                  E
                                     S
                                        T
 for life…”

can transport them
to places they may
never visit.

“Opening a book
takes them on …
journey…
adven­tures.”

Oulipost Version

“Thckead are
outback futurity race.

If thickhead are not able to
 read,
                                    write…
 speak

in a proper man of  God
where are we for outback futurity race?”

Reading, shear stress said,
can give childhood…

E
      N
                                                                    F
                 L
                                                   U               
                                            R                
                                   A
                                      M
                                          E
                                                /
                                                       Z
                                                                                               I
                                                              G
                                                                 G
                                                                     U
                                                                       R
                                                                         A
                                                                                                      T                           

 for lifeguard”

can transport theocracy
to placer minings thickhead may
never visit.

“Opening a bookkeeping
 takes theocracy on …
joystick….
advertisements.

Subsitutions:  They becomes thickhead. Future becomes futurity race.  Manner becomes man of God.  She becomes shear stress. Child becomes childhood. Energy become enflurame, Zest becomes ziggurat.   Life becomes lifeguard.  Them becomes theocracy.   Book become bookkeeping.  journey becomes joystick.  Lastly,  adventures becomes advertisements.

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